peer review day (:

This passed Wednesday we did our peer review for our first essay on English 115. First I was a little nervous because Mr.Aranson told us that we were going to work on teams so they could check our errors and also write to us on the kisses ans wishes paper. I was really nervous because I was thinking that I was going to have too many mistakes. I just calm myself and thought to myself that everything was going to be good and that the information that my classmates were going to give was going to be really helpful for me and for my essay.

I give my group some help on what to do on their essays to make a better essays, for example I told them maybe to explain more about the song, or any other thing they were talking about.they also told me that I was doing good on my essay but that I had to make some changes and to try to make more clear my opinions. I did like this peer reviewing because its going to help me a  lot working on this essay and also for the next essays that we are going to do.